Thursday, December 13, 2012

Darkness before dawn

Darkness before dawn.
I lay in bed listening –
neighbor’s alarm clock…
 
Or the simpler version, which I prefer despite the loss of specificity regarding the alarm...
 
Darkness before dawn.
I lay in bed listening –
neighbor’s alarm...

2 comments:

my heart's love songs said...

i prefer the second version, too.

Happy Holidays, Richard!

Richard Cody said...

Thanks, Dani!