Thursday, September 13, 2012

Sunlight and Cobwebs

Sunlight reveals
in the corner…


Sunlight reveals
Two versions of the same piece today. The first is, obviously, a longer and more "explainy" rendition of events. The additional line, to my mind, provides a context which the second, shorter piece does not. Not to say, if I may say so myself, that the second piece is lacking. Ultimately, I prefer the shorter version, tending as I try to do more and more these days, though you could not tell from this increasingly rambling explanation, to the simple. 

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